Visually it was all pretty incredible stuff.. Musically I thought you could have developed the initial idea more. It felt kind of like you just jumped from one idea to another. And the initial musical idea (the one the video starts out with) sounds pretty great. I don't know.. it just felt like you were developing something and lost it.
You shot this yourself aswell?! That is some amazing footage. Musically I love how the synth gradually rotates faster and faster, overall beautiful piece.