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Hi there,

just to invite you to discover my new track. you, fans of BoC could maybe appreciate it !

http://soundcloud.com/life-in-a-box/reversummer

Cheers !

Fab/Life in a box

lifinbox... this is one of the best tracks I've heard anyone plug in this forum before (though, admittedly, it's only been recently i've been checking them out).

One v.v.v.v.v.v.v.small point I'd make, is that the synth is maybe a bit too dominant (for me) during the last third-or-so of the 'main body' track. I think there's possibly something interesting that could be done by maybe digging that synth beneath the percussion, or even messing with it. Cutting it. Sending it out in jazzy directions. That's just my 2cents. And I'm not a musician (probably the only non-musician on Twoism :p)

But really-- I really enjoyed this. Thank you!

More- please!!!

Like this one a lot! Keep 'em coming! I'm also really digging the artwork for the tracks!

Snufkin wrote:And I'm not a musician (probably the only non-musician on Twoism :p)

You're not alone

Many Thanks guys for the feedback !

for Snufkin : many thanks for the advice, i will try something
for syberia : thanks, man ! for the artwork unfortunately, i've just grabbed it from google images and thought it was a good pic for the track. maybe i'll find here some talented designers to work with for future album cover ?

and to you both : you can find my first album here for free : http://lifeinabox.bandcamp.com/album/pr ... of-comfort

my facebook artist page, to stay tuned : https://www.facebook.com/lifinbox

and my soundcloud page where i put all my unreleased tracks (there are lots of them !)

Thx for the support and advice !

Fab/Life in a box

Hum... sorry, here's the SC address : http://soundcloud.com/life-in-a-box

This is really impressive, only thing I'd say is maybe tone down the synth a little bit in the synth, it does kind of over power everything else a bit but still this is really damn good.

please use this thread in the future so as to not clutter up the boards, thank you.

http://www.twoism.org/forum/viewtopic.php?t=4953

First off, I gotta say I love how everything comes together. The way you brought in the main melody, and the snares and clicks is absolutely beautiful. I love the use of acoustic instruments, makes the track have a really organic feel.
The way the track progresses is pretty awe inspiring, it's like post rock but electronica kind of, really beautiful stuff in this.

Only complaint is I dunno if the little coda at the end was all that needed, but besides that, beautiful track. 8/10

I wouldn't put this to fans of BoC, I'd say more for fans of Four Tet tbh.

Hi everybody,

i'm really happy you like the track so much, and many thanks for the feedback and advice. it will help me to finalize the track. i'll put the final link on the appropriate thread !

Thx !
Fab/Life in a box