One on Twoism - Volume 2 [Artwork Submission]

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Twosim? :lol:

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IGNORE THE SPELLING OF TWOISM AS TWOSIM!!! GEEZ IM A TARD!

BUT I WILL MAKE SURE IT IS ALL FIXED FOR THE MAIN SUBMIT!

Just look at the text and see what you like and where you like it on the cover.

Someone said no text on the cover at all! Which I feel is a cool idea... Just have it on the spines.

So what's the verdict?
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My faves are the first one and the fourth one, both are excellent. I don't think the font should intrude too much with the image. I think if you softened the text of the first like in the fourth one it would be perfect (only my opinion of course :D)

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BrandNewRetro wrote:My faves are the first one and the fourth one, both are excellent. I don't think the font should intrude too much with the image. I think if you softened the text of the first like in the fourth one it would be perfect (only my opinion of course :D)


AMEN. (after reducing the 'vol.2' about 50/60%)

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ross adey wrote:
BrandNewRetro wrote:My faves are the first one and the fourth one, both are excellent. I don't think the font should intrude too much with the image. I think if you softened the text of the first like in the fourth one it would be perfect (only my opinion of course :D)


AMEN. (after reducing the 'vol.2' about 50/60%)


Okay, I will post it after lunch. Peace.

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i like the first one polar sky :)

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Okay, made more changes do to requests of text size.

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I like number 2 from that bunch.

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Personally I like the fourth one from the original bunch but I would suggest making the text a little smaller and maybe instead of having it go all the way across have it stacked and place it above the girl.

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polar sky, is it possible to post a high resolution version of that front pic?
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preferably without the bauhaus font

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Variations on a theme:

V1 -
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V2 -
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V3 -
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V4 -
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V5 -
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V6 -
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I dare say... I like the image rotated better.

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What about #2 from above rotated and the text left in the same place but also rotated? I think that would work.
Edit: Nevermind. it's already there. Hah.
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wwbjd wrote:I dare say... I like the image rotated better.


I agree.

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Romeda wrote:What about #2 from above rotated and the text left in the same place but also rotated? I think that would work.
Edit: Nevermind. it's already there. Hah.


Yeah I agree that version 6 looks really good.

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hey guys, please check this out. let me know what you think. thanks.

http://joebot-recreation.deviantart.com ... 2-71322558
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Joebot Kill wrote:hey guys, please check this out. let me know what you think. thanks.

http://joebot-recreation.deviantart.com ... 2-71322558

The second and the sixth are excellent. We shouldn't cover up the little girls eyes, they are the focal point of the picture.

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Joebot Kill wrote:hey guys, please check this out. let me know what you think. thanks.

http://joebot-recreation.deviantart.com ... 2-71322558


i like the serif face you used in the last one. i think that works really well.

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I like the last one too. It gives this...90's feel to a 40's picture....or something :shock:
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